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刘晓燕考研英语满分大作文模板

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大作文:

(1)正面(正确、积极的):01、02、03、08、10

反面(不正确的做法、消极):04、05、06、07、09、11

(2)一幅图还是两幅图(04、06)

(3)作文有无规定题目(仅02)

(4)1st:描述图画,2nd:解释图画要表达的含义,3rd:严重性及采取的举措。

例如:2011环境污染;2010:一个火锅——多种文化

*2012重点预测正面

What the image is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! Featured in the above illustration are large numbers of people who , sitting in front of computer , are placed in separate rooms . However ridiculous and humorous it may seem at first glimpse, this cartoon does carry rather significant implications .

 

Evidently, the  cartoonist aims to enlighten us that we should keep a balance between interenet communication and face-to-face .A great deal of attention is being paid today to internet .  Indeed , it has long been know that using the internet in a proper way should be great emphasized ,if we want to construct a harmonious word . to our disappointment , however ,with an ever-developing of science and technology ,people in mounting numbers tend to neglect the seriousness of this problem . hence people’s emotional distance in becoming larger and larger .   

 

keeping a balance between internet communication and face-to-face , to my mind , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society . Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of using internet in a proper way .Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run !

 

 

一种事物或现象(正面意义倾向)(第一段黄色为:is a hot pot,which is a symbol of the world.二三段的中心词换为:cultural communication)

 

第一段:套话+图片描述+套话

What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! (并列押韵,可以说是有用的废话)Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them having only one leg , are running forward together. (妙在featured和who,插入的独立主格结构。这句话是得分重点,需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。)However ridiculous and humorous(押韵) it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather significant implications . (可以认为是有用的废话.)

 

第二段:主题句+深入阐述+分条阐述+分条阐述

1Evidently , the  purpose  of  the illustration is to mirror the fact that teamwork (中心词)is essential to achieving success .(第一句,这是揭示主题的句子,大家的句型百变不离其宗。也是得分重点.)2Indeed, a great deal of attention is being paid today to (这个句型是某年阅读理解的第一句)cooperation , which has profound implications for both individual and whole society .(第二句,这是一个长句子,同时也是一个概括句,改卷老师看到你思路清晰。) 3First and foremost ,in this world of change and complexity, the need for teamwork is of the greatest importance , if one want to realize dreams . (第三句,分述)4In addition , our country as a whole also could not afford to part with(这个句型是我从某年阅读理解里借用过来的) teamwork spirit,if we are ever (这个单词可以不要,不过我看到真题里有这个用法,单词简单,但是用法深奥,应该是比较地道的英语。我想改卷老师一定很喜欢。)going to move forward in terms of politics , economy , culture and society .(第四句,分述)

 

第三段:评论

Teamwork spirit ,in my view , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society .(此句是插入+并列) Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of teamwork spirit .(转折句,是我从徐绽的作文书里总结归纳的。)Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run ! (强调句,高联的辅导班讲过这个句型,强调+并列+插入)

2012考研大作文万能模板---英语一

第一段 3句话

   ①In the picture above,...... .第一句话(句型要用do+ing\with短语+非限定性定语从句)要将整个漫画内容描述完整。 要考验大家的语法功底,首句很重要哦!

②There has been a heated discussion about them in the newspaper.       第二句就是套话,大家也可以自己换其他自己喜欢的句子。

③The picture , at the first glimpse , seem to be simple ,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.          同第二句解释的一样。

 

第二段 6句话        

    记住:写作重点就在此段,因为大多数考研者都会把首尾段写得出色,但仅此这打动不了阅卷老师,比的就是谁的第二段写得漂亮,谁就获得高分的机会大。

  ①The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the (漫画主题词  ) / nothing is more harmful or damaging than the ( 主题词) .           当时漫画反映坏/好的方面的主题时,大家相应地进行替换。纵观2001-2011年的漫画都是如此,大家不用太怀疑。

②In no country other than China ,it has been said ,is this phenomenon more obvious (好的主题用此句). / is the problem of (有关主题词) more serious 坏的主题用此句).

③What's more,nobody dare fail to / the public fail to attach due attention to the ( 主题词 ) .    进一步强调主题的好/坏 。

④By doing so ,....... .           给出反映主题的相应的理由,这句话也要各位写得好,才有打动阅卷的老师给高分的心 ,我只能作为指引。

⑤It will cultivate an optimistic /pessimistic view toward the world and extends people's life expectancy .      给出自己的结论,好写,套话 。

⑥Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the higher price .

               最后一句,虚拟语气结尾,增添文章句型多变的色彩 。

 

第三段 

    这段可以完全是套话了,大家可以自己选择喜欢的,把握一点就行:3句话,做到句型复杂多变,反映主题。

  ①In summary,while some people may remain unconvinced by my discussion,but the analysis I have offered so far should at least make them aware of the significance of this phenomenon .

  ②Therefore , the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness that ( cultural exchange 2010年主题词), to a great degree , plays an importance role in our lives . 

  ③Only in a reasonable ,prosperous and healthy atmosphere ,can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people will enjoy ( their life ) to the uttermost .

 

 

考研英语作文模板

As is vividly depicted in the picture, ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts. The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, , Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

  中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害,并举例论证,预测危害的趋势

(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.

  最后一段要强调解决问题,谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识,加强执法

(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

 

As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

   As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

 

 As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above (开始描述图画), 加上which is both upsetting and most thought-provoding (第一端)描述图画

  The aim of the painter of the drawing above can be briefly stated as follow (陈述观点 ) 可以把这些话加到作文中去 结合作文内容

  perhapers no other things could gain more public attention than...in china for the time being

  .

  It is generally believed that...is a hot topic which is most talked about ,not only by the city residents but also by famers. (任选一个)

  As the society becomes more and more advanced and complicated . ...plays a more and more important role in the life of individual members of the society and in the development of the society itself

  According to recent investigation, there is an increasing numbers of people who share the concern about the issue of ... which is a problem that deserves public,professional and political attention

  Different people have different opinions. Everything has its advantages and disadvantages .It is assciated with your experience ,life style and emotional concern .It is really true for this case

  Advantage and disadvantage are the basic dual concepts of nearly everthing in our life ,It goes without saying that for every advantage,there is always a disadvantage .An advantageous for one group might to prove disdvantages to others .It is really true for this case(作比较)

  句中最好使用一个倒装句 only + 状语 + 小倒装 如

  only when we develop ourselves in a well-rounded way ,can we become prodctive memebers of society (正文)

  counter-measures must be taken immediately so as to ...

  First of all law and regulations must be set up In addition ,a long-term and nation -wide campaign must be launched to popularize...among the general public. Only in this way can we keep...(结尾)

 


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